my side of the story... wanna hear it?: December 2007
Thursday, December 06, 2007
story told on 10:30 pm �

[Verse 1]
I never thought I'd be the one to say this,
But thank you for the memory you gave me,
Even though I lived with regrets,
That I had to let u go,
Deep down I know,
That closed door is all I have left

[Chorus]
I miss you, I miss you so,
Why did you have to walk away and
Leave me crying in the rain
I try to hold on,
With all the broken pieces of me,
I never knew it was so wrong to love you

[Verse 2]
I still remember that day,
I felt so loved,
But now it's gone,
A piece of you stays with me,
"because you are so sweet"
I'd die every time I see it,
I can have you no more

[Chorus]
I miss you, I miss you so,
Why did you have to walk away and
Leave me crying in the rain
I try to hold on,
With all the broken pieces of me,
I never knew it was so wrong to love you

[Bridge]
Why couldn't I let you go?
Why couldn't I throw it all away?
Our picture sits beside me,
My smile is just another sad story,
Deep inside I'm a million pieces

[Chorus]
I miss you, I miss you so,
Why did you have to walk away and
Leave me crying in the rain
I try to hold on,
With all the broken pieces of me,
I never knew it was so wrong to love you

Please... Let me go...
Even if I miss you so...
Even if it means goodbye............

Title: No title yet
Category: This is supposed to be a song lyric I composed, but it's feels a little poetic.
Meaning: Erm... I think it's better you all come up with your own meaning you think is suitable.

Additional Notes:
1) I'm not sure what title i should put this.
2) This is the ORIGINAL draft.
3) I welcome any comments whether this should be a song lyric, or a poem. If any of you have any title suggestions, corrections, any suitable words, or even a tune that matches this draft, please feel free to drop a comment.
WARNING: I hope that if you drop a comment, please let it be an HONEST one. If you think it sucks, just say it. I don't want any 'I think it's great but my true opinion is that it sucks.' Your honesty is greatly appreciated. COPYRIGHT PROTECTED.